全方位发展迈入宾夕法尼亚大学之门
2015/07/17/周五 15:09
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学生背景：
Name:J.同学
School： International School 学校：国际学校
Accepted School：University of Pennsylvania 录取学校：宾夕法尼亚大学
GPA: 3.89/4
AP Courses: AP Physics C Mechanics, AP Physics C Electromagnetism, AP Calculus BC, AP Computer Science A, AP Macro and Micro Economics, AP World History, Post AP Chinese, AP English Language and Composition, Multivariable Calculus and Linear Algebra
AP课程：AP 物理力学，AP物理电磁学，AP微积分BC，AP英语和写作，多变量微积分与线性代数
TOEFL: N/A
ACT: 34
SAT II SAT :
Math 2C 800 数学2C：800
Physics 760 物理：760
Activities:活动
1) Science National Honors Society President
国家荣誉协会会长
2) Forensics Speech and Debate Captain
取证演讲和辩论队长
3) TEDx Events – director, founder, and speaker
TEDx活动-主管，创建者，讲演者
4) Shanghai Student Film Festival, Student Director
上海学生电影节，学生主管
5) Art and Charity Extravaganza – event chair, documentary chair
艺术与慈善盛典活动-活动主席，纪录片主席
6) Debate Team President
辩论队主席
7) Model United Nations, Deputy Secretary General, President of ICJ
模拟联合国副秘书长，ICJ主席
8) Robotics Team, Captain
机器人队队长
9) Student Council, Freshman Class President, Visual Productions Committee Head
学生会，新生班级校长，视觉制作委员会主任
10) Student Ambassador
学生大使
11) Technology Team Captain
技术队队长
Additional Activities:额外获得
1) Cornell University Intern – intern at Cornell’s particle accelerator and worked alongside researchers and professors
康奈尔大学实习-康奈尔的粒子加速器组，并与研究人员和教授一起工作
2) On-Bright Electronics China
电子中国
3) Mini We-Day Shanghai
迷你上海天
4) Mosaics: Chinese Arts, HFR Veritas, GuizhouThrough the Lens, Concordia Film / Photography
马赛克：中国艺术，HFR VERITAS，贵州镜像，康科迪亚电影/摄影
Community Service:社区服务
1) Donated 75,000 RMB to underprivileged children and NGOs
非政府组织给贫困儿童捐款75000人民币
Awards and Honors:获奖和荣誉
1) 2nd Place, Original Oratory, APAC Forensics in 2013
2013年APAC辩论赛讲演第二
2) Shanghai Debate Best Speaker in 2014
2014年上海辩论赛最佳讲演
3) Best Documentary Film in Shanghai Film Festival in 2014
2014上海电影节最佳纪录片
导师点评：
JC signed a PO Platinum package in the 1st semester of his Junior year, and after 2 productive meetings with his Senior Consultant, we were able to construct a thorough and meticulous roadmap for him to follow. J’s charisma and analytical skills impressed us from the beginning; however, we really had to slow him down and develop a structured timeline that would allow him to develop the full range of his abilities and quirks in a productive way. Sometimes students who are naturally gifted find it difficult to concentrate and present a compelling profile to the top US universities. In this roadmap, we accounted for his average test-taking abilities, and recommended that he take the ACT after he was unable to raise his score on the SAT. Furthermore, we had conversations with J about his broad range of interests, and outlined goals for him to accomplish during his final year of high school, and beyond. We stressed that these goals were merely a starting point, and instilled in him the discipline to make the vision presented in the roadmap a reality.
J同学是在11年级的第一学期签署的PO的铂金套餐，在与他的高级顾问见过2次面后，我们给学生制定了一个全面而精细的计划。从一开始，J同学的非凡领导力和分析能力让我们印象深刻，我们真的要让他慢下来，为他开发一个结构化的时间表来让他全方位的发展他的能力和特色。有时候，这种天才学生很难集中注意力，也很难给美国顶级大学呈现令人瞩目的材料。在他的计划中，我们占用了一些时间来训练他考试的能力，并且建议他如果还是不能提高SAT的分数，可以考ACT。此外，我们曾与他谈论他的广泛兴趣，并概述了他在高中最后一年需要完成的目标。我们强调，这些目标只是一个起点，并且告诉他最终实现的目标。
This comprehensive planning gave J a step-by-step and actionable plan for him to follow in order to focus his interests and develop a compelling hook for college. J\'s inquisitiveness provided a strong foundation to build upon, and Prestige Only helped J strengthen his interest in Physics by helping him apply for a summer program at Cornell in which he worked with a highly advanced particle accelerator. Furthermore, the nexus of J\'s many passions was public speaking, so Prestige Only helped J by creating an independent project--in this case a TEDx talk at his school--that would set him apart from other students. Finally, Prestige Only helped J narrow down the focus of his personal statement by paring down the word count from his initial draft of 3000 words to the eventual 600.
以专注他的兴趣和发展来吸引大学为目的，这个综合规划给J同学一个循序渐进且可行的计划。J的求知欲有很大的建设空间，PO帮助J同学申请了康奈尔的暑期课程来加强他在物理方面的兴趣背景，这使得他能体验到高度先进的加速粒子器。此外，由于J在公共演讲方面的兴趣，所以PO帮助J同学创建一个单独的项目-在学校进行a TEDx演讲，这使得J同学体现出了与众不同。最终，PO帮助指导J同学精炼了他的个人陈述，使得个人陈述从3000词提炼到600词。
At every step of the way, Prestige Only\'s skilled team of Senior Consultants and Operations Consultants communicated these plans and steps to J\'s family, in order to ensure that our mentorship process was efficient and productive. From the initial roadmap to the individual meeting followups, Prestige Only\'s team assigned tasks and deadlines, and J was able to focus his efforts and transform his hard work into lifelong skills for success.
在申请过程中的每一步，为了确保我们的指导是有效的可执行的，PO的高级顾问老师和操作顾问始终和J的家人保持紧密联系。从第一次个人计划指导开始执行，PO团队分配了任务和完成任务的截止日期，J同学可以从他努力的每一步中，令他走向成功。
Market Differentiator 市场优势
Shared Resources from Past Successful Cases 从成功案例中分享资源
Prestige Only\'s proven track record gives us a powerful foundation to draw upon when mentoring students to successful acceptance results.
PO的良好记录在我们指导学生可以成功获得录取上，为我们提供了有力的基础。
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