用实力征服圣路易斯华盛顿大学

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学生背景：

Student Name: R.

School: US Private Day School (Catholic)学校：美国私立走读高中

Accepted School：Washington University St. Louis 录取学校：圣路易斯华盛顿大学

GPA: 4.23/4 Weighted GPA：4.23/4 有加权

SAT: 2340 (Superscored)

SAT Subject Tests:

Biology: 760 生物：760

Math 2: 720 数学2：:70

Literature: 650 文学：650

AP Tests: AP考试：

Biology 4 生物4

English Language & Composition 4英语及写作4

Calculus BC 微积分

English Literature & Composition英语及写作

History of Art 艺术史

Physics 1 物理1

Activities:活动

Activity Coordinator, Rotaract Club

Rotaract俱乐部活动协调人

Varsity Football team

大学足球队

Big Brother orientation and mentorship program

Big Brother方向和指导项目

Varsity Tennis team

大学网球队

2 week volunteer trip

2周志愿者旅行

Various Community Service

多种社区服务

Campus Ministry

校园服务

Youth flag football team coach

青年旗足球队教练

National Honors Society tutor

国家荣誉协会助教

Quiz Bowl

测验碗

导师点评：

Through Prestige Only's rigorous reading and writing development, we were able to enhance R's writing skills to be commensurate with his excellent test scores and GPA. Though R was a stellar student--as evidenced by his GPA--and a great test taker, he needed to improve his writing skills in order to be able to flourish in college. R benefited from signing with PO as a Junior; with the Platinum package, we were able to focus on his writing skills well in advanced of college application deadlines.

PO通过严格的阅读和写作训练，我们可以提高R同学的写作技能，使得他的写作技能跟他优秀的考试成绩和GPA相称。虽然从GPA可以看出R同学是很好的学生，并且也很善于考试，但是他需要提高他的写作能力。R同学得益于他是在11年级开始接受PO辅导的，签订的是铂金合同。我们可以集中帮他在写作技能上进行提高。

We exposed R to a wide variety of journalism and independent readings for him to digest. Not only did these serve to heighten his interest in Biology, but also we were able to ask R to reflect on these readings by writing essays that mirrored college essays. Furthermore, we suggested personalized book lists for R that expanded the breadth of his knowledge. When it came time to dive into school research, PO assigned mock supplemental essays for R so that he could practice writing about his passions and how he was an excellent fit at certain universities.

我们给R列出各种新闻和独立阅读资料供他阅读消化。这些不止增加了对生物的兴趣，并且我们可以让R同学通过写论文来深入思考这些阅读资料，并且正好映射到了大学的论文。而且，我们还给R同学列出了个性化的读书清单来拓展他的知识面。当深入学校研究的时候，PO又给学生出了补充的模拟论文题目来训练R同学的写作，以及如何更好的匹配想申请大学的要求。

Finally, PO helped R through the intensive and time consuming essay brainstorming and drafting process. Given R's ambitious school list, PO was able to plan ahead and construct an aggressive personal statement and supplemental essay schedule for him. We were able to get a head start on his personal statement and supplemental essay brainstorming well before the August 1 date when the Common Application opened. R's writing was solid but uninspired; PO worked with R to improve the level of specificity of his writing by teasing out relevant examples from his childhood and schooling. R parlayed the extremely valuable practice that we conducted into strong school supplemental essays that highlighted his academic desires and thorough school research. We are confident that PO's exhaustive Reading and Writing Development helped R in terms of writing successful college essays; however, we are more proud of the fact that he will be competent to face any challenge in his college years, and beyond.

最终，PO团队帮助R进行了密集且长时间的论文头脑风暴和写作练习过程。面对R同学的选校清单，PO团队给学生做一个时间表提前计划并构思优秀的个人陈述和补充论文。我们在Common开放申请的日期8月1日前尽早进行了个人陈述和补充论文的头脑风暴。R的写作基础扎实，但是缺少灵感，PO与R同学通过梳理相关的例子，从他的童年和教育来提高他的写作的特异性水平。R这些极其宝贵的经历，我们指导R补充论文里着重强调自己的学术和想进入学校研究的欲望。我们有信心，在PO彻底的阅读和写作帮助下，R成功写出大学申请论文;然而，我们是更自豪的是，他将能胜任自己的大学时代的任何挑战，并超越自我。

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Comprehensive Planning, Customized Roadmaps and Detailed Follow-up Reports

全面的计划，定制化指导和详细的跟进报告

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大家都在一起协作——家长，顾问和学生。OC会促进家长和顾问之间的联系，最大限度地提高效率和确保过程之间的沟通。每个学生配备一个顾问，因此，可以为学生提供个性化的体验，重视个人的关注。

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